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[LOW LOSS] - This low loss bnc cable is made of highly tinned copper braid shields and pure copper which could maximum protect the signal over large distance.
[LOW VSWR] - The VSWR of this bnc coax cable is 1.15 on 450MHZ. The bnc cable doesn't introduce static nor interference when inserting your devices and 100% highly shield performance.
[Applications] - This bnc male to bnc male cable is support to transfer both RF and video signals. It is an ideal for Two Way Radio, Ham Radio, Hf/Vhf radio, BNC receiver antennas, Antenna Extension, Radio Scanner, Amateur Radio and so on.
[Prevent Fall Apart Connector] - Compared with other bnc cable, our heating shrinking tube is up to 2.2 inches and built with inner adhesive. It could support professionally connection between cable and adapters without worrying about connector pull out.
[Well Built Structure] - The inner conductor of this rg58 bnc cable is made of solid copper, the outer conductor is made of bonded Aluminum foil and tinned copper braid. It could be better in resist oxidation and corrosion.